This post is in response to D.Wallace Peach who had a discussion with her muses. To read her discussion click here.

I was sitting at my computer yesterday when the door opened. I didn’t look up because I assumed it was my husband coming in to work on his computer.
I felt the person stop behind me and look at my work. I knew this wasn’t my husband because he never reads what I’m typing. I turned and saw, standing behind me, a beautiful red-headed young woman.
“What the… ?”
“That’s not right. She wouldn’t do that. You need to rewrite that paragraph.”
“That’s the best paragraph I’ve written in ages. I’m not deleting it.”
“I’m not telling you to delete it, just to rewrite it. You can save it for another time. Another story. It doesn’t fit in here.” She tossed her long red hair back.
“Who the hell are you to come barging into my study telling me my writing is wrong? How do you know she wouldn’t do that?” I frowned, trying to look fierce.
She shrugged. “Trust me. I know. I know all about your characters and writing.”
This was weird. A total stranger in my house, and my husband hadn’t said anything. He let her in, right? He must have done.
“How did you get in? My husband wouldn’t let a stranger wander around the house. And I didn’t hear the doorbell.”
“You should know me. We’ve worked together now for a long time.”
“Worked together? I work alone. I’ve never collaborated with anyone.”
She laughed. “That’s what you think. I’ll put you out of your misery. I’m your Muse.”
“M-my Muse?”
She nodded. “Yes, and I’ve come to tell you that you need to write a book about dragons.”
“But I have dragons in all my fantasy books, except one.”
“Yes, you have dragons in the books, but the books aren’t about dragons. See, there’s a difference. This one, for example, has dragons.” She waved her hand at my computer screen. “They’re important to the story, but it’s not about them. It’s about people’s reaction to them. See the difference?”
“Mmm. I think so.”
“Can you make the next one be about the dragons themselves instead?”
I nodded. “I think I can do that. Leave it with me.”
“Don’t forget to change that paragraph. Really, she wouldn’t do that.”
I sighed and turned to look at her. Was it my imagination that she turned into a red dragon before fading away, leaving just a whisper.
The next one must be about dragons.
Yeah, dragons are used to doing whatever they want.
Top of the food chain.
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Wow. I really enjoyed this one 😍
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Glad you enjoyed it, Jude. She can be a bit bossy, though.
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Yeah dragons are used to doing whatever they want. Top of the food chain.
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Too true!
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It seems like the next book is interesting. Thanks to your muse, Vivian!
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Thank you, Miriam. I’ve got one to finish first, though!
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It sounds good 😄.
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Word to the wise: never argue with a dragon muse. I’ve been speed dating muses since I broke up with the last one and whenever I smell a whiff if sulfur, I’m out of there. 🙂
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Oh, I know! I’ve some experience with dragons, having met them in a number of my books and a short story. Tricky creatures to deal with.
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Nice advice! We have no choice but listen to them, my muse just slams the door and vanishes for many days if i don’t pay attention to her commands.
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You are right, Balroop. They can get stroppy.
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There be dragons . . . 🙂
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😂😂😂
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Vivienne, I was immediately pulled into the conversation with you and your muse. Your muse seems confident, intelligent and wise. My money is on her. Change the paragraph and write about the dragons themselves in the next story. I strongly suspect she has been right all along. 🙂 Erica
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Of course she was right. She always is. It’s just me thinking I know best.
And with people telling me I must write about the dragons, i need to start thinking about it. Hard.
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Clever writing and interesting muse. I’m a little jealous. I can’t wait to read your book from the dragon’s perspective!
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I’ve now got a number of people interested. I’m going to have to do it sooner than later, I think.
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Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
Vivienne’s muse is both an editor and source of inspiration. I hope you enjoy their conversation. 🙂
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At least I don’t have to pay her for her editorial inputs!😄
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LOL. I didn’t even think of that. Hey, I want an editor muse too.
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Haha!
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That was fun, Viv. I had no idea that so many writers have bossy muses. But they do give good advice. 🙂 Happy Writing (about dragons)!
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Glad you enjoyed it, Diana. She is bossy, isn’t she? I didn’t know how bossy until I wrote anout her. Now I’ve got to write a book about dragons, not just have them make an appearance.
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Lol. My muses do that to me too. And I end up following their orders! It’s so funny how much influence they have. Lol
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Yes. I suspect we don’t listen to them enough. They’re usually right.
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Been there, suffered that….
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